Since the first draft, we've added a lot more information to the advert. We started by adding reviews, which we felt would make the album more enticing, especially if they were high reviews. At the bottom of the advert we put the record logo and the website of the band. Adding this kind of information seemed like a necessity to us, as we saw it on other magazine adverts.
At the bottom right corner, we put the logos for different streaming services where the album would be available. This helps make the advert more realistic. We also changed the colours of the logos to black and white, as it fit with the black and white theme we have used throughout.